Reviews for Sweet Miseria
lemontea-addict chapter 24 . 10/19/2009
yay! Edward and Vi action! bout time too! lol. oh thank god he doesn't sparkle. lmao. i wonder if Vi will be difficult and denial about all of it. great update! i can't wait to read the next chapter!
dhoa chapter 24 . 10/19/2009
Omg you updated twice in a month.I like this chapter, I can't say anything bad about it. Oh and don't rewrite chapter one again.
renegade01 chapter 24 . 10/19/2009
love it! god, i look forward to ur updates too much. i need to stop... maybe next time.

leave chapter 1 alone woman! its good. better than good. if a story doesn't capture my attention and interest from the beginning, i get bored easily and leave it. urs got my attention and still has it. ur obviously doing something right... :P

peace out
readaholicxxx chapter 24 . 10/19/2009
oh can't wait to find out what happens next!
Leanna de Weisdorn chapter 24 . 10/19/2009
hmpf can't say many negative things about the story or this chapter. Ok, somethings remaind me of Anita Blake, but it was wors at the begining, now I think it is a story for it self and I realy like Edward.

Good Luck

SpontaneousSilhouette chapter 24 . 10/19/2009

I've been reading your story for a while, but never quite got around to reviewing. Sorry.

However, I've finally remembered and I think that this chapter was interesting. It seems like we are seeing a more sensitive side of Viola which is good, even though I love the kick ass side of her just as much. Poor her and Edward. Haha they keep getting interupted.

Nice chapter and I'm looking forward to the next update.

- SS

P.S. I love Jack
Harley-Quinn chapter 23 . 10/11/2009
I really feel for Viola. You never would have guessed that this had happened to her from the way she's always strong, but it definitely makes me like Jack a lot more! He's one of my favs :D
Blackshadowkeeper chapter 23 . 10/11/2009
OMG Edward Edward Edward!

cannot wait for the next chapter!
CupcakeLove chapter 23 . 10/11/2009
I am in LOVE with this story. Viola's humor was great and can't wait for her to be with Edward! PLEASE UPDATE!
T.M.Enigma chapter 23 . 10/11/2009
Whoa, I never would have thought that had happened. It explains a lot though. Cannot wait for the next chapter!
readaholicxxx chapter 23 . 10/10/2009
brilliant chapter

shows that even the toughest people have insecurities
renegade01 chapter 23 . 10/10/2009
i wish u didn't split the chapter up, i want to read more! damn, this is good. i love reading about jack. more so than edward..? not quite sure yet. ;)
Charlee Rayne chapter 23 . 10/9/2009
I like Viola's position. Loved this chapter by the way. It's nice knowing what happened to start all of this. Its very well done. For most people, it would have been hard to pull off- to make sure it didn't look cheesy- but you did excellent!
renegade01 chapter 22 . 9/17/2009
Wow... i really wish you had the next chapter out already. Love it. The action scenes are fun and entertaining and I adore Viola's sense of humour. ;)
DeadAccountabcdefghijkllll chapter 22 . 9/11/2009
Wow. PLEASE update soon (I mean, no pressure or anything), this story is fantastic. I'm so into it!

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