yay! Edward and Vi action! bout time too! lol. oh thank god he doesn't sparkle. lmao. i wonder if Vi will be difficult and denial about all of it. great update! i can't wait to read the next chapter!

Omg you updated twice in a month.I like this chapter, I can't say anything bad about it. Oh and don't rewrite chapter one again.

love it! god, i look forward to ur updates too much. i need to stop... maybe next time.

leave chapter 1 alone woman! its good. better than good. if a story doesn't capture my attention and interest from the beginning, i get bored easily and leave it. urs got my attention and still has it. ur obviously doing something right... :P

peace out

oh can't wait to find out what happens next!

hmpf can't say many negative things about the story or this chapter. Ok, somethings remaind me of Anita Blake, but it was wors at the begining, now I think it is a story for it self and I realy like Edward.

Good Luck

Leanna

Hi

I've been reading your story for a while, but never quite got around to reviewing. Sorry.

However, I've finally remembered and I think that this chapter was interesting. It seems like we are seeing a more sensitive side of Viola which is good, even though I love the kick ass side of her just as much. Poor her and Edward. Haha they keep getting interupted.

Nice chapter and I'm looking forward to the next update.

- SS

P.S. I love Jack

I really feel for Viola. You never would have guessed that this had happened to her from the way she's always strong, but it definitely makes me like Jack a lot more! He's one of my favs :D

OMG Edward Edward Edward!

cannot wait for the next chapter!

I am in LOVE with this story. Viola's humor was great and can't wait for her to be with Edward! PLEASE UPDATE!

Whoa, I never would have thought that had happened. It explains a lot though. Cannot wait for the next chapter!

brilliant chapter

shows that even the toughest people have insecurities

i wish u didn't split the chapter up, i want to read more! damn, this is good. i love reading about jack. more so than edward..? not quite sure yet. ;)

I like Viola's position. Loved this chapter by the way. It's nice knowing what happened to start all of this. Its very well done. For most people, it would have been hard to pull off- to make sure it didn't look cheesy- but you did excellent!

Wow... i really wish you had the next chapter out already. Love it. The action scenes are fun and entertaining and I adore Viola's sense of humour. ;)

Wow. PLEASE update soon (I mean, no pressure or anything), this story is fantastic. I'm so into it!

-Madgirl