Ooh.. burn to see Leon with someoen else..ah well, at least now she can be with Edward.

It's good. WHat is good about it? LEt's see.. You're charachters are interesting, the plot is good. I give you an A. Sorry about the slight oddness

Wow. It's good. I like the name of your Vamp. I like Vi. What is she? She's not a werewolf or a vamp but something else.. um. I suppose I shall see...

Good stuff! DAMN I should have just waited for the rewrite! Keep up the good work and good luck on the rewrite.

I’ve read through your story once, I just wanted to review…

There was one mistake, although by no way major. You have ‘Boy, was I trying his patience and loving it.’ The comma doesn’t need to be there, but doesn’t exactly need to be taken out either. Do with it what you wish.

Your writing style is unique; although the plot has yet to start you’ve added enough detail about her ‘new assignment’ to make it addicting.

~Dreamless~

I absolutely LOVED this. Your style of writing draws the reader in, and I find myself wanting more.

Viola is a woman after my own heart - I wish I were the tough go-getter sort.

I was going to list a few of my favorite lines, but there ended up being too many.

This is definitely being added to my Favorites list, and that's quite a feat in itself.

Good for you.

Cheers,

Sammy

Hope it's continued soon!

wow. I just found this story, and I have to tell you, it's very impressive. lol. I love it. It reminds me of the Anita Blake books. Quite a lot actually. But, it's good. And I love Edward. And Jack haha. Viola is a very interesting character, I like her also. Keep it up and I will be looking for more from you.

Faith

NO! One of the reason's why i was drawn to you story before I read it WAS the format :[ because a lot of ppl suck at getting the right one. :[ You had the right Format :'[ I love this story but if you feel the need to change it, I understand :[ But i wanted to let you know that I thought the story was absolutely Perfect the way it was

hey I'm game. i can be patient just let me know when ya gonna be posting the revised chapters k.

well i just wanna tell you that this is a great plot and you are a good writer and i don't have any complaints if you wanna go back and edit them but please don't leave it...i surely wanna read the whole story you have in mind...happy writing!

if she's calling other werewolves... "werewolves" ... then i got the whole thing wrong, unless she was one and won't reveal it till later. XD

i still love it though. can't wait to see what edward does!

you are definitely more experienced at writing than me.

i haven't read these kinds of stories in ages, ever since my dad yelled at me for wanting to read the Demonata... XD

love this story to deah, I do.

werewolf girl! yay! this is pretty good! should be written as a novel! lol not many werewolf-based books out there, so this one goes on my top favorites list all the way with Cirque Du Freak.

Please update soon. I really like the story.