Hehehe, she gets all the good things, doesn't she? I love it, and can't wait for the nest chapter!

The best clubs are the ones with strippers. Hot and very intense scene last chapter with our girl and Edward. I do like him though, he's strong enough to stand up to her without being a complete asshole. Excellent and very hard to accomplish.

Wonderful and please continue soon!

Ollie May

Ah, brilliant chapter. I loved that last line. "Don't call me Princess." Very nice. Lots of attitude :D I can't wait to read more of this!

~carm~

This is a wonderful story. You created a character who everyone just ahs to love because she's so strong-willed. You are a brilliant storywriter.

This is by far the most interesting thing that I've read in weeks! I am so impressed with Viola, she's such a badass but it doesn't seem fake like you see a lot on FP. And I'm most intrigued by your vampires, that last remark by DeCarte has me wondering what Viola's done to piss him off so bad before they'd even met! The plot is solid and your grammar is excellent. Wonderful, please update soon!

Ollie May

interesting! update soon!

I like this chapter, and I certainly like where this is going, though there wree some minor mistakes and chapters are too short, still it is good.

Awesome!

So when does the werewolf show up?

Look forward to the next chapter.

A perfect ending to a perfect chapter :) You've got a real flare for storytelling. Good job on this, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

An excellent story so far. You've got a solid main character, and a refreshing outlook on storytelling. Good job, and I can't wait to read more.

~carm~

Your story's really good so far. I like your vivid descriptions and the way you show us the main character - she seems very alive. I look forward to reading more of it.