wow, i'd just like to say this is an amazing fic. definitely one of my favorites i've found so far, especially since you were able to complete it which i think is a hug accomplishment on your part so congrats! i look forward to reading the sequel and any short stories and wish you luck on getting this published, it's a book i would definitely buy!

Figured i'd review so you can reach 400 reviews!

Woo-ho! :D

I would think she would be a lot more emotional, with edward betraying her and all. I know she isn't used to feeling much because she is a hunter, but there has to be something right? Great story, I like the betrayal and love mixed in, but I wish there was more edward in the end... same with the sequel.

I love the name of the stuffed bunny. Lolita. Classic and it fits very nicely into your tale. :D

hello!

that was awesome, i cannot begin to describe how exciting the whole story has been so far, i have been hooked on it for three days now, fighting anyone trying to pry me off the laptop. *sigh* although i had to endure parental lectures, but nothing new there!

anyway, i just wanted to say that the story and characters were fantastic, still like edward though, even if he was a traitor, it was kinda like a betrayal with a plausible excuse.

now i shall go read the sequal!

good luck and fantastic work so far!

oh, how i love thee...

ur an amazing writer with a kick as.s imagination and great writing style.

love how u wrote ur plots and storyline.u wrote every detail with such precision without making them boring but enough to entice.

that is why i always enjoy good fantasy/supernatural stories. it shows the writer' originality. and u are one original writer for sure.

at some point of the story i did wonder, can edward be a traitor? but i quickly diminished the thought cause he was just so sweet and perfect. so when it was revealed he was indeed a mole from the beginning i had a mixed reaction. bu mostly i was sad for viola. she didnt need that crap! but he's not a bad guy that much i know and understand. im ranting cause it just doesnt seem fair to her.

im no thinking too much about the open ended ending cause i know there's a sequel.

oh, i hope u made edward squirms for sometime before viola forgive him :)

and i love jack even with all his killer loves viola in his on way and that is refreshing.

FINISHED! WOO!

Nice conclusion. I liked it. A bit confused about the Ally thing, but the Pack is cute, the ending was cute, and Viola is a badass. Bravo.

Wow. Crazy chapter. Loved the creepy eyeless witch suicide. (Horrible description, I know.)

Small problem: I think you need to flesh Tera out more. It's just like boom she appears and boom she's dead. I understand that she's the nurse but I felt like that was a rather small realization. I wish she'd been behind something more, been a more... important villain, I guess.

That said, the bit with the magic was pretty fantastic. It's interesting to get a peek into Viola's powers.

On to the epilogue!

Ah, betrayal. Such intrigue it adds.

The illusions were a bit... not confusing, exactly, as that was intentional, but... eh. Something's up with them.

It's so Viola to go in alone. Hope all ends well.

HOLY SHIT.

It's nice to be reading this in its entirety. No cliffhanger, woo!

Reading onwards.

Still reading! Ahaha I keep getting so horribly sidetracked, but I've been making my way through the story.

Bit of an infodump in this chapter, might want to edit that.

Overall, though, I'm loving the story, though it's taking me ages to read. I have a chronic lack of free time.

That is some bad ass apocalyptic shit right there. I tip my hat to you, sir.

XD Best arrest scene ever. EVER.

*Chortles*

Hm. Maybe she's not a Hidden, but I'm still wondering about that strong sense of smell and those mental blocks. Ah well. I guess I'll find out, won't I?