Reviews for Sweet Miseria
53BookTitles chapter 32 . 4/8/2010
PLEASE tell me there's more!

I like Edward's new name, it's snazzy ;)

But seriously - make more chapters, please!

xx
Brandi Heir chapter 32 . 4/8/2010
intense much? this entire story practically had me on my knees, i was so nervous! loved it though, the sarcasm mixed with action. you've got a rapier wit, my friend.

when you write, often you speak out loud as you type. sometimes, you say things and think you typed it when you really didnt. that happens alot here. you mean to say, for example, "everyone" but you really only end up typing "every". it's fine, i do it all the time. the trick is realizing you do it and going back to type in what you missed before you forget it.

lots of descriptions, can nearly feel the emotions inside myself, and your characters are so well developed. i think, and i'm no editor, but i think you only have technical errors like that. i hope you have luck publishing this. i hear from my author friends that sometimes it can be discouraging so stay stubborn! it'll pay off in the end.

good luck, and can't wait to read more!
CSlaughter chapter 32 . 4/8/2010
Lovely chapter, especially the last few lines. But don't you think having the names Alex and Alec in the same story might be a tad confusing?
D-Mish chapter 32 . 4/8/2010
Amazing ending. Sad that you made her die though. Or did you? Still amazing chapter, so much emotion, so much detail. Written beautifully.
TheKatsPajamas chapter 32 . 4/8/2010
Oh no! Poor Viola! What a champ though! Lol Love, love, love the story. Genius. :)

-JRG
readaholicxxx chapter 32 . 4/8/2010
oh my God - she better not die!

Great chapter!
Leanna de Weisdorn chapter 32 . 4/8/2010
A fast ending, otherwise good!

Leanna
That One Dork Stacey chapter 32 . 4/7/2010
She can't die .

I refuse to believe she died :[ She's the 'daughter of a fucking Original' therefore the words "Death has never had such a sweet voice." coming from Viola simply doesn't happen :D

We'll see about this whole dying ordeal in the epilogue ;]

-Stace :]
Charlee Rayne chapter 32 . 4/7/2010
You better not end like that...

my god...what kind of person are you?

to leave off in the first place is bad enough!

But to NOT finish it with a nice conclusion...

she needs to be saved!

and she needs to end up with someone!

you can't do this!

please!

take pity on us poor people who have followed you since the BEGINING!

Those who had loved Edward!

And hated Leon!

And liked JACK!

AND EVERYTHING!

PLEASE!

I BEG YOU!

AND I WANT YOU TO KNOW THIS WAS THE LONGEST REVIEW I'VE EVER WRITTEN IN MY ENTIRE LIFE!

So please please please please please please finish it! MAke a sequal! Just...please...

and if you were really, really, really nice and kind, you'd post the conclusion REALLY SOON!
pille-ip chapter 32 . 4/7/2010
Aiaiaiai bad cliffie! Again bit off and hid the rest of the story... No cookie points to the cliffie!

But big and yummy cookie points to Raico! Really intersting twists!

About Edward's new name, well I think Alejandro really does suit him.
Evil-Angel92 chapter 32 . 4/7/2010
As i reader I say no! but as a follow writer I say good job on the ending it's good to make us wait cuz it keeps us wanting more. Can't wait for the next story. :)
Chocorange888 chapter 32 . 4/7/2010
Thanks for the last chapter, I know I haven't been able to review in a while (trust me I really wanted to, I couldn't even get on fictionpress!) But I would like to say that it's been great, and I was actually really surprised about Edward's or may be now Alex's done, I hope you will be able to publish this, I wish you the very best of luck!
renegade01 chapter 32 . 4/7/2010
loved it. that was an intense ending. if this was an actual book - and it will be - i would be so incredibly frustrated that the story would end there with just an epilogue left... and we'd have to wait for the next book to come out.

damn girl ;)
I'mAFairyPrincessLookAtMeDance chapter 32 . 4/7/2010
OMG. I am not going to be able to wait till the epilogue, then the sequel! Is she, isn't she, will she have changed because of her 'death', how is she gonna react with Edward and her dad, and LEON! ARGHH! And no, don't change his name. Edward suits him. Unless, of course, you deem it nesseccary. Er, neccessary. Whatever.

I liked how she didn't become super powerful at the end; made a change. She simply used her birthright and suffered because of it, too. It's an original take on an overused concept (human girl/boy takes on the recently discovered supernatural comminuty. Hilarity ensues) and I really, really enjoyed it.

IT WAS SO GOOD. PUBLISH IT.
midnightsun101 chapter 31 . 3/26/2010
omg! this chapter was freakin amazing!

please hurry and update lol i need to know whats going to happen next!

:)
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