Reviews for Fabricated Lies
Mia Nicole chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
I REALLY like this poem...it's really emotional and I like the way the words flow. 'Tears rape your jaded eyes' I like that part.

Keep Writing, Mia
onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
i like how this ended. it came around full circle from how "happiness was like somthing" to how it was false to end in frayed ends. goot job! lol