|Reviews for Lost in Summer|
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
Great ending. I'm a sucker for great endings.
| Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
One of my faves. You really captured how fast these things can go. Kudos.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
This is so lovely-bold in the moment. I apologize for not reviewing it sooner. It brings me back to similar instances and experiences that I've had. For that I thank you. This will reside on my favorites. Marvelously reminescent tone. Hope all is well with you. MD:77.
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
life moves fast
but it moves so slow if think of it as minutes
rather than moments.
| R. Sharmayne chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
How could you not be in love with you after you read this? This was really very good. The descriptions, the use of time and fragment sentences...awesome awesome.
| randompoetry chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
The descriptions in this are pure and powerful. And mentioning car crashes...I dunno, gave me this tingly feeling.
| ronshaberry chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
Hello. Yay, it's been a while since you posted! :D Wonderfully visual. I love your play with words, like with the "wilting window-sills". It's true, people change so quickly. You captured this so beautifully, really. I love the use of distinct images and the change that they go through, instead of just saying "he changed she changed". Which is awesome.
I hope you keep writing and posting! Thanks for the read. :D