Reviews for A Dark Dream
Valkyre chapter 8 . 1/5/2008
Funny!
twilove chapter 8 . 12/18/2007
I loved it! Too bad the chapter was so short, make it longer next time. Don't worry though, whatever you write is fine with me!
StephanieWilson chapter 8 . 11/4/2007
plz update
OoohLookACat chapter 8 . 10/25/2007
interesting

i get the feeling she's gonna get caught in the cross-fire

or something...

can't wait for more

izzie
Bibi.Love chapter 8 . 10/22/2007
love it.

so glad u havent decided to stop writing this story.
phelps112 chapter 8 . 10/20/2007
he sure is taking a lot of cold showers lately. His own fault though.
cherry617 chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
ok, im going on to the next chapter! good job.
people.are.strange chapter 8 . 10/16/2007
Hah, this guy is infatuated with her. Sorta feel bad for him. You'd think it would her for him to be hard all the time.
ridiculouskopec chapter 8 . 10/16/2007
aah such sexual tension... litereally! haahaha

nice job! please update again soon!

love the name kyrian btw...its soo...exotic and smooth... lol ;)
karatekid369 chapter 8 . 10/16/2007
Yay! I was wondering when you would update again! This was, yet again, a wonderful chapter! Lots of sexual tension and the very nice dream of his. Can't wait for the next one!
Uninvited chapter 8 . 10/16/2007
I love this strory. The way you describe his desire for her its overwhelming. I cant wait for the next chapter
templeton21 chapter 8 . 10/16/2007
"It was hard. And so were others things. I sighed. Again."

Thank you for updating this story. I smiled when I came on and saw that you had uploaded a new chapter. I love the way you write. You have a talent for saying exactly what you mean and having it speak volumes like the sentence above despite it being a short simple sentence. Your writing is anything but simple. Not many people have a talent for having so much meaning behind their choice of words when they write.

I am anxious to see how this story is going to develop and I eagerly await the next chapter. Thank you again for writing this story. It's hard to find a well-written mystery story on this site that clearly isn't written by a fourteen-year-old girl.
templeton21 chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
I read this story when you first published it and I loved it. I found it once again and I still love reading it. The way you write, it's simple and yet so in depth at the same time. I hope you continue with this story someday.
MelGrl chapter 7 . 8/27/2007
I wonder if she will found out he's an assasin. Please update soon.
Fairytale Gurl chapter 7 . 8/15/2007
haha wow. update soon please!
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