Reviews for Little white lies
thursdays and rain chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
denial, the first stage ;)
CrimsonEmerald chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
I love this. The wording is very...what am I searching for...well, raw. The emotion is raw and the images sort of send your mind reeling with the rythme. Very nicely done. They story behind this must have been interesting indeed, but to the reader, it seems slightly fragmented, which is still alright.

"you grabbed me with both hands and climbed inside me it was a crash bang..." I love that line for some reason.

Great work.