Reviews for Under Cover of Feathered Wing
insomkneeack chapter 5 . 11/29/2008
Aww, I like it, I really do. Please write some more...please? More, more, I want MORE! Lol. Seriously, I love the writing style, and I love how you don't just jump right into the fluffiness. Keep up the good work, okay?

Ash
Silver Rain Fell chapter 3 . 6/12/2007
Oh wow. This is getting really interesting.

I love how you haven't just rushed straight into what we all know (or think) is coming next. The detail you've put in is really good, too. I can see it all perfectly clearly.

Keep it up!
Sabe chapter 3 . 4/24/2007
Tsk, David. Corrupting the poor boy with your champagne-drinking ways. Cranberry juice champagne sounds horrifyingly nasty, by the way. _

And I still have to skim over parts with WEIRDLY FAMILIAR NAMES because it freaks me the fuck out. Apparently I lack your narcissistic talents.

Yay, Catholic-ness.

Haha, is Jake seriously so naive as to be surprised that not everyone goes to church every week? That's amazing.
Jayn chapter 3 . 4/22/2007
Cute chapters. Lovely story. Please update soon. _
asian who owes you porn chapter 3 . 4/19/2007
... is it sad that three chapters into your story, all i can say is "JAKE IS BOTTOM. PLSKTHX"?

well, also that i love your story and i can't wait for it to continue. but you knew that already.
Sabe chapter 2 . 4/17/2007
You have no idea how much I hate you for giving my name to a blond character.

"...but it took a good half hour before he was happy with his outfit and his hair."

I repeat: and he thinks he's straight? XD

Hee, David.

It's hard to find a reason to demand more when I already know most of the rest of the plot, but I'm demanding more.
Silver Rain Fell chapter 2 . 4/17/2007
I really adore this so far! I like how you haven't rushed it at all and how there are more than two prominent characters (a rare thing in most slash, no?).
Sabe chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
Hee, yay! Finally there is angels-ness.

I like your characters (as I'm sure you know by now), and there's some horrible part of me that wants to knit that Christmas hat for your show. :-p Because people think it's weird when I want to knit horrible things, normally.

I don't know to what extent you care about the particulars (or to what extent I /know/ the particulars), but this is supposed to be a morning mass, right? Because the main Christmas celebration for Catholics is usually the Midnight Mass, which is either in the evening on Christmas Eve or actually at midnight. Also, your description sounds more like a Christmas concert (which would probably take place separately from mass). If it's supposed to be an actual mass, there could still definitely be the choir and all that, but it would close with specific lines, and then end with a final song. I feel vaguely sacrilegious for saying that you ought to use the specific lines, but you probably should (because repetition is a big part of the Catholic-y-ness of it all, especially to people who are familiar with it).

But that's just nitpickiness. I like it muchly.
Jayn chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
Good start. Hope you update soon!