|Reviews for Cat's-Eye Private Investigators|
| Anters chapter 3 . 6/15
I found myself reading this story after being intrigued by your most current iteration's synopsis, looking at your profile, and finding a whole collection of Cat's-Eye PI stories. I figured it only appropriate to start from the beginning, and what an exciting find this was.
Considering I am a decade late to the party on this particular story, I will keep my reviews sporadic and condensed until I finish each story. Undoubtedly what little critiques one may find in this story have vanished in subsequent stories as you have grown as a writer over an impressive ten year run on FictionPress.
What I will say is what an incredible fluidity you have to your dialogue. It reads flawlessly as if one was watching a film or television show. Considering dialogue can be a finicky beast to tame, it is very impressive.
Needless to say, I am hooked. I'll be reading through more of these as time allows!
| Sketchy-d00d chapter 1 . 9/21/2015
I was mostly intrigued because her name is Catalina, a name I use a lot in my writing to protray myself since I'm called Cat. *purrs* you have my attention, Nobel Knight. -Cat.
| TheTigress chapter 2 . 10/12/2014
I just started reading this story today...I accidentally started reading one of the later ones first a couple of days ago and just now realized that this is the very beginning. NOW I finally understand a lot of things that I completely did not get before lol...This is a pretty good plot. I mean, I'm only on chapter two but I like how everything is developing and the pacing is great. I did notice quite a few little mistakes in the writing (one or two spelling mistakes and just a few things that could have been typos)- but that was the only thing that really bothered me and it wasn't anything that made me want to toss my laptop across the room so that's a good sign. XD I will definitely keep reading this one!
| fairy Eva chapter 22 . 12/19/2009
Loved it. Just finished reading it after finding it completely by accident, and now I can't wait to start on the second story!
| chasny chapter 22 . 10/2/2009
great story and charactors well written good storyline. just downloaded parts 2 and 3 lokking forward to reading them thanks charlie
| 53BookTitles chapter 22 . 4/30/2009
This story is really good!
| Sammerdoodles chapter 22 . 7/8/2008
Hi! Me again! I think this story is great, and it inspired me to work a little harder on my story, which I will post as soon as I can get an author account set up. I love the ending!
| Spideymint chapter 22 . 4/5/2008
Too good. I read this non-stop from start to finish. Very, very awesome story in every way. You can definitely count on me to read the sequel when it's posted.
| Sammerdoodles chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
Great story, love it 2 pieces!
| your vennela chapter 3 . 11/13/2007
I'm guessing that Ray is associated with the White Serpent in some way. As in working with her. When I first read about her assassin, I thought it was actually the Panther, but it turns out the assassin has his own name, Crip.
Shouldn't you change the rating from K to T? The theme is a bit mature.
This story is good so far.
| your vennela chapter 2 . 11/13/2007
Oh, so Ray was cheating on his wife for a while when Cat came back from Spain...
Going to read more right now.
| your vennela chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
When I first read the summary, I was scared. I thought this was actually about a cat and her adventures. I'm okay with watching cartoons and reading comics, but a novel about a talking cat put me off the idea of reading this story. I have now discovered that it was Catalina.
What's up with Cat and Ray? Were they lovers? Or is Cat in love with Ray? Or did Ray cheat on his wife with Cat? Or were they just superhero and sidekick?
I like the beginning. Onto to chapter two.
| Shayby chapter 22 . 11/1/2007
So, first off, I love the story! I think you ended it really well, opened up for the second story beautifully. I do have one question tho.. Catalina's ex, the one that was killed, is he really dead?
Second thing, thanks soo much for mentioning my C2! I may have alot of stories there, but I don't seem to be getting alot of people looking thru it, so thanks for kinda promoting it. And if you'd like, feel free to send me any stories you'd like to add. I love to get the word out about the better stories on this site!
Can't wait for the next story!
| SamoaPhoenix chapter 19 . 10/29/2007
I love this story.
| Koinophobia chapter 9 . 10/25/2007
So T is sort of a plant man? That's cool... like that Norse God who was killed by mistletoe...