Reviews for Mosaic Flesh
rhyddid chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
this is extremely powerful and it relates to me a sense of very dtrong desperation!
SirScott chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
That was a descriptive poem. I really form the images in my head. Not sure if that's a good thing.

SirScott
Grimm Days chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
Wow... just the image you get when you read this. Great work!
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
O. I love the title.

The imagery in this piece is amazing. Great job!

Rowan.
a beautiful somewhere chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
I love how one line seems to almost bleed into the next...

This is amazing.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
Wow... Just... Amazing as always. *favourite*
DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
Great title, Ashelin! It made me want to read it ASAP!

I love your description of blood as 'red flow.' It's really simple but it hits home hard.

"Grey sky eyes"-I love how that sounds. So dark, hopeless, and perfectly sad.

Great work!
Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
Amazing descriptive imagery. I loved it and the title as well. Freshly unique