Reviews for Gatekeeper
Kathleen Moon chapter 30 . 5/23/2007
yay! you updated, but you left a cliffhanger -pouts- you have to update sooner now! and aw...Aniol realizes that he loves Kaji, and it is soo obvious that Kaji loves Aniol. I love them

Yep, Rogue and Yuan do have feelings for eachother, I'm just waiting for the big fight and then the makeup, I really do like you, scene...hehehe

Update soon!
I'll Be Your Fairytale chapter 30 . 5/23/2007
Honey, this is incredible! I have read the whole thing and am looking forward to the next installment, cause I need to know what happens with the Ruel soldiers! Oh, and that Lira girl, she's alright as a friend to Rogue, but he just seems as though he'd be better off with a guy, you know? Like Yuan? After all, they do say that there's a very fine line between love and hate and one can get confused...plus, that passionate hate could be used as another kind of passion entirely! Update soon.

Luv, I-B-Y-F, x
C. Khafre chapter 29 . 5/22/2007
Well it was kind of complex, but I think I sort of get it. Poor gatekeepers! I like how you've made it so that those with power may also have vulnerabilities... very realistic! And Lira... is she Rogue's sister, or something else? Coz I got some brother-sister vibes from them. You know, I can't believe you don't have more reviews. Are ppl blind or something? Looking forward to another chapter!
Kathleen Moon chapter 29 . 5/22/2007
I don't like Lira...she creates strain on the possible love match I have created between Yuan and Rogue...Kaji and Aniol are so so so cute...more more more more! please!
Lavender-Drop chapter 29 . 5/22/2007
will we learn what type of family? like a wife and kids or sisters and brothers? since he seems to be jealous of Lira and if he has a wife (or husband) at home, i'd have to dislike him, but if it's his mom he left or something, then i find his jealousy cute...
Sundown chapter 2 . 5/22/2007
Hey! I just started getting into this story! Don't think you're bad at descriptions! your summary drew me into the story and I am a serial skimmer when it comes to finding a story to read! My only pick would be that sometimes its a little hard to follow which character is doing what at times. Other than that...i am really tired tonight but I intend to read more, and eventually catch up to where the story is now! Some interesting ideas here!
Kathleen Moon chapter 28 . 5/21/2007
yep, Yuan is definately curiuos about Rogue, and he sounded jealous...hehehe...I'm surprised that Kaji didn't pick up on that and tease his friend. The interaction between Kaji and Aniol just keeps getting more and more precious. Fantastic all around! Update soon!
C. Khafre chapter 28 . 5/21/2007
Hmm... Rogues 'gets' to Yuan hey? I guess we'll have to wait and see what that means. I HOPE Rogue wouldn't turn out to be evil in the end though... that would kind of wreck things (between a certain someone else and him I mean hehe). Well then, I'll keep on reviewing as long as you keep on posting- Here are some virtual salty crackers (are those salty rice crackers or something?) to get your going! : )
Lavender-Drop chapter 28 . 5/21/2007
before they left the city, Kaji said Yuan has a family...will we ever learn about them? or did i read wrong? (its happened before :hides face:)
C. Khafre chapter 27 . 5/20/2007
Um... how about rice crackers? I know no one likes rice crackers but I like them lol. Very curious about this keeper of memories person...
Kathleen Moon chapter 27 . 5/20/2007
of course I want Rogue and Yuan together, the tension between the two is cute...and Kaji and Aniol are so so so so so cute, especially poor sexually frustrated Kaji...hehehe, you're so mean! Update soon!
C. Khafre chapter 26 . 5/20/2007
Jeezez! Didn't really expect that! Well I for one, think your citrus scene was just fine! So far, I can't remember reading a fully dressed albeit hot one on FP before lol! Can't wait to read more.
Opal Rose chapter 27 . 5/20/2007
You don't like cookies? That is soo weird...

Another great chapter. Poor Kaji, being interupted. Heh, that was actually really funny.

And if this is an update that took a while to post, I will love you forever and ever. Most people post chapters weeks apart, and you post, like, days apart. It's awsome.
C. Khafre chapter 25 . 5/20/2007
I don't know what you have planned, but uh, Rogue and Yuan might prove to be a very interesting pair hehe. This chapter makes me even more curious about gatekeepers- how much power they have, specifically. On to the next chapter (you're updating more quickly than we can review, but that's a good- no GREAT THING) : )
Kurohane Shizumi chapter 26 . 5/19/2007
Oh. My. LORD HAVE MERCY!

You are not BAD at writing kink at ALL, you liar!

Jeez...

I was...

You know...

There with them... (cough)

ANYWAYS! (hahaha)

Amazing chapter. If didn't already love your story I'd love it!

I'm glad my answers helped you. O hope that you keep the idea of publication somewhere in your head. By the way, do you draw?
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