Reviews for Gatekeeper
Lavender-Drop chapter 22 . 5/14/2007
Just because it would be so out there Rogue and Karl have all my votes!

I was expecting the little thief to say "him" and point to Aniol. I love Aniol! I'd cuddle him but I think he might not like that... He is so quiet, he hardly speaks at all but I guess that might be because of his lack of social skills...

Ano. Keep up the good work! I can’t wait to read what happens next
Kathleen Moon chapter 22 . 5/14/2007
I'd definately do Rogue and Anei, but then that's just me...lol...I can't wait for the next chapter! -bounces up and down-
Kizera chapter 21 . 5/13/2007
o So that means there related no wounder Anei is so nummyfull lol j/k I like both Rogue and Anei attitude wise, but i like Anoil aswell because of his innocent behinde, kinda reminds me of myself on some part _;;...anyhow, can't wait for my story so you can read it, I want to see what you think of the story and my characters :)
Kathleen Moon chapter 21 . 5/13/2007
-lets breath out in a whoosh- good, it's just Yuan. Great chapter! I can't wait for more!
Kurohane Shizumi chapter 20 . 5/12/2007
You rock! I am also a novelist here of FP.C but I had to take my stuff off because I'm trying to get it published. _'' I hate to say this for everyone's sake, but maybe you should think of doing that with this one. I think it would certainly sell very well. _ I would buy it.

Either way, rock on!

_

xoxo

Shizumi
Kizera chapter 20 . 5/11/2007
Oops I'm sorry, I meant intregue or something of that sort, i think i spelled it wrong still, but i am happy you came up with this chapter fast, i was getting bored waiting lol j/k anywho, is that who i think it is, or is it a hole knew person?..and are Anei and rogue just friends or something more :O stay tuned for the next chapter Lol
Esquirella chapter 20 . 5/11/2007
OH NO! A cliffhanger!
Esquirella chapter 19 . 5/11/2007
Hmm ... Anei is a bit too interested in Aniol, isn't he?
Kathleen Moon chapter 20 . 5/11/2007
wow, already 20 chapters, you should be proud of yourself. Excellent plot line. I can't wait to see what happens next, and I'm guessing that the green-eyed stranger spells trouble...
kizera chapter 19 . 5/10/2007
Well isn't this just cute _ Anei inreags (dunno if i spelled that right lol_ me I like his personality, somewhat _...and I wounder what will happen next, kaji is so scared of loosing him, it makes Anel seem like a little girl :P...I can imagine, and this story makes me want to draw them all hope for a new chapter soon
Violent Pornography chapter 19 . 5/10/2007
This story has me completely intrigued

even if that is spelt wrong

the characters are so original and fascinating

and the plot is amazing

I love it
Kathleen Moon chapter 19 . 5/10/2007
His mind is extremely confused...mysterious and rather interesting, full of conflicting emotions...it's amazing that you can keep hold of him without losing hold of him, I know I would because his character is rather confusing, in his thoughts. Good job...I think I'll just stick to my tormented Sinlon and to my abused Kelly...they aren't as difficult to understand...Aniol would give me a headache (probably why you mostly deal from Kaji's point of view!) Great job and I can't wait until the next chapter!
deactivatedddddddd chapter 11 . 5/9/2007
sorreh i haven't reviewed latley, i've been busy with tests

Good chapter btw v I'm stil reading but at a slower pace since i don't have much free time

don't stop
tricksy chapter 18 . 5/9/2007
“Hopefully… Peace.”

Is it weird that I became sad when Rogue said that? It was just... such a good piece of dialogue, despite its shortness. That moment was awesome, it made the more feminine side of me want to squeal.

Something else I like about this story is the characters and their depth. They each obviously have their own personality and you're one of those people who is able to stick to that. It's wonderful because it makes me love them all even more (except for Karl, x_x)

I think it was the summary that actually got me to click the link to the story at first. It made me go, 'Huh', so I wanted to read at least the first paragraph or so to see what was up. Then I got hooked (:. Funny, because that's why I write stories too! :D I get a certain scene in my head and then I feel obliged to write it out into this long, detailed story even if my point was only to share that one part of it.

Haha, no worries, even if you WERE pulling my leg (Ouch, by the way). The plot is magnificent and it's leaving me scratching my head and wishing that I could read your mind so I would know the end quicker. I just felt like you already knew how fantastic the plot was, so I would compliment you on another aspect of the story.

I will most definitely stick with this story until its completion. I'll be like a stick in the mud, but more exciting and vibrant.
Esquirella chapter 18 . 5/9/2007
It sounds like Rogue has all kinds of interesting friends ... which is good. Kaji will need all the friends he can get. Karl is a bastard extraordinaire!
402 | « Prev Page 1 .. 12 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 .. Last Next »