Reviews for Tomfoolery |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome read. Hell, I wouldn't have minded seeing Jason in college! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is laugh out loud funny. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love, love, loved it! your writing style was simply a delight and your protagonists even more. i love it when the female leads are like this-funny,sarcastic,witty. they're the best. and of course, Jason. i'm not gonna say anything except that i think every single girl wishes she meets someone like him in their lives. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This was completely brilliant! I liked everything about this story. The characters, the story, the way it was written, the dialogues, the incidents! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww, this was ridiculously cute and funny, with just the right amount of suspense. i loved it. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good opening chapter. This definitley kept me interested and more than a little intrigued. Can't wait to see where you go with this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was undeniably my favorite story on this site that I've read so far! I loved every single minute of it, thanks for putting it up here, it was great. Good luck with the rest of your writing and hopefully I'll get a chance to read more from you. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read the story, and LOVED it. Even though I wasn't there throughout the story, I fell in love with it, and am realy sad that it has come to an end. :) |
![]() ![]() I have to say that even though this story may not have the most reviews or the longest of chapters, it's definitely a story that I truly and thoroughly enjoyed. The amount of fluff was well-balanced in my opinion. I hope you churn out some more stories in the future, I look forward to it. Much love! |
![]() ![]() aww, it's so cute. they are so right for each other. i have to say that this story is one of the best i've read on fictioinpress. it makes me smile. |
![]() ![]() i have only 3 words; I LOVE JASON I LOVE JASON I LOVE JASON I LOVE JASON. Todd's not bad either. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jason has got to be one of my favorite characters. He's just so adorable. Even though your story was short, it was still really good. I personally thought the length was really good and the way you planned everything was amazing. Awesome job :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was such an easy-read that I barely want to stop to review LOL. It was addicting and thrilling. I can't wait to find out more about the characters. Jason's already growing on me :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Then the car got quiet for a moment. I was about to leave before Jason said quickly, "So you like cheese?" I GET IT! its from she's the man! yay! i feel smart! |