I loved your story! It is creatively written and has great potential as a comic. I believe audiences would really enjoy that format.

That was such a great story! I will definitely go look for the new one as soon as I can.
Also, what book did you write? If it's anywhere as good as this one, I'd love to be able to support you if it's for sale.

Yes! I love this story. So well written and really enjoyable to read. I'm so glad that Kaeden and Danika are together. And I'm really happy with how you they are mostly honest with each other. Looking forward to reading the rest!

Nooo! I don't want them not to be together!
Great story so far. Looking forward to reading more!

wow! great story! I wish you would make a sequel that was focused on these characters... maybe set it forward a couple hundred years ;P

Anyway. wanted to let you know I enjoyed it.

awesome story! It was so enjoyable and unexpected

I started this story today and finished it in one breath. Forget homework. _
You are an amazing writer! I loved the characters (even/especially the bad guys), the dialogue (one of the best parts, in my opinion), the world (or should I say, people of the Otherworld), the culture (another best part), and the snatches of Irish, and probably other stuff that I've forgotten to mention.
Danika and Kaedan (I did wonder why was he sometimes called Kaede) are an adorable couple. I barely remembered that they fell in love in just a few days. I saw right through Jessie and Garrett - cool points for me - and I'm pretty sure I let out a sigh when they finally got together. Fionn just made me laugh. I was very happy that Ashera turned out to be crazy; that's my favorite kind of villain. So yeah. Any iffy parts that usually make me scoff were smoothed out and disguised and written so elegantly that I hardly noticed them. And yes, there were a bunch of clichés, as you pointed out, but I liked them.
I'm definitely following the sequel! Keep it up! :D

Girl knows how to throw a knife, nice.

Sigh, this is sounding really sad...This better have a happy ending! lol

Bah! This is gonna get worse before it gets better huh?

Wow, I would have been freaking out if every time I looked I saw a vampire in my rear view mirror.

Oh shit...

Well someone is taking this all in stride.

Hmm, I like Danika she sounds like a cute 5 foot something bad ass.

I absolutely love this story and I'm so sad to see it end, I look forward to more of your stories :)