Ah, there's the trigger. ;) The visit from Fionn was interesting. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

The friendly banter between friends was cute. It made me smile. It doesn't sound like the Annemarie secret is a good one to keep from Kaeden. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Great job at the end with the foreshadowing. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

The beginning of the chapter was cute. The ending created a dangerous, suspenseful air. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

"get ahole of" should be "get a hold of". "ahold" should be "a hold", considering ahold isn't a word. Jessie is a relateable character. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

"reasont" should be "reason". The headaches are a great foreshadowing clue. It sounds like she is only pretending to take energy. It looks like Jessie might learn about the otherworld later if something's triggered. ;) Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

"horizen" should be "horizon". I wonder about the guilt. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

'it's "human" form' should be 'it's "human" form'. I like that he was saved. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

I'd been wondering where on earth this story had gone! Nice to see it back and a nice update... I hope that there can be more soon. You really are a good writer.

this story is so freaking awsome!

You're right. You ARE evil. Now update more, darnit! I want more Kaedan and Danika! You make us wait far too long! Its been foorehver!

Well, I would be scared. I liked how we got most of the answers in this chapter. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Great job at description. I like the pace. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Amazing chapter. I sort of suspected Garrett wasn't what he seemed. Now I'm wondering what is he. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Oh, that doesn't sound good. Great cliffhanger.

~Twilight Starr~