Reviews for Ar Dhul ó Sholas Dó ::After Dark:: |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, that doesn't sound good. Great cliffhanger. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute ending to the chapter. ;) Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good addition. I liked his ending words. They were very dramatic. The encounter between him and Ethan was interesting. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job at describing the healing. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is very tragic. Poor characters. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, forbidden love. It was interesting to sit in on a meeting of light and shadow walkers. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great addition. Nice job with the fight scene. I like how she tried to help. ;) ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice cliffhanger. Her lack of appetite is definitely a symptom of something. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the chapter title. Garrett's reaction was interesting. Kaeden's abruptness towards the end makes it look like he's keeping something from her. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() The two kinds of 'Endless Ones' is pretty original. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Towards the end was really interesting. I'm wondering what he is. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. The encounter between Danika and Kaedan was interesting. I'm wondering what will happen next. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Darn, it's over? Gosh, that was good . I hope you update soon. -Kira Love |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kudos on the interesting beginning. I like the thought of using Gaelic and Irish words/heritage. Nice work. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this story. There are very very few stories on fictionpress that i even like, and this is one of them! |