Oh, that doesn't sound good. Great cliffhanger.

~Twilight Starr~

Cute ending to the chapter. ;) Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Good addition. I liked his ending words. They were very dramatic. The encounter between him and Ethan was interesting. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Great job at describing the healing. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

It is very tragic. Poor characters. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Ah, forbidden love. It was interesting to sit in on a meeting of light and shadow walkers. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Great addition. Nice job with the fight scene. I like how she tried to help. ;)

~Twilight Starr~

Nice cliffhanger. Her lack of appetite is definitely a symptom of something. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

I like the chapter title. Garrett's reaction was interesting. Kaeden's abruptness towards the end makes it look like he's keeping something from her. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

The two kinds of 'Endless Ones' is pretty original. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Towards the end was really interesting. I'm wondering what he is. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Good chapter. The encounter between Danika and Kaedan was interesting. I'm wondering what will happen next. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Darn, it's over? Gosh, that was good . I hope you update soon.

-Kira Love

Kudos on the interesting beginning. I like the thought of using Gaelic and Irish words/heritage. Nice work.

Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

~Twilight Starr~

I absolutely love this story. There are very very few stories on fictionpress that i even like, and this is one of them!