Reviews for Ar Dhul ó Sholas Dó ::After Dark::
Twilight Starr chapter 9 . 7/16/2008
It is very tragic. Poor characters. Nice work.

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Twilight Starr chapter 8 . 7/16/2008
Ah, forbidden love. It was interesting to sit in on a meeting of light and shadow walkers. Nice work.

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Twilight Starr chapter 7 . 7/16/2008
Great addition. Nice job with the fight scene. I like how she tried to help. ;)

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Twilight Starr chapter 6 . 7/16/2008
Nice cliffhanger. Her lack of appetite is definitely a symptom of something. Nice work.

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Twilight Starr chapter 5 . 7/16/2008
I like the chapter title. Garrett's reaction was interesting. Kaeden's abruptness towards the end makes it look like he's keeping something from her. Nice work.

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Twilight Starr chapter 4 . 7/16/2008
The two kinds of 'Endless Ones' is pretty original. Nice work.

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Twilight Starr chapter 3 . 7/16/2008
Towards the end was really interesting. I'm wondering what he is. Nice work.

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Twilight Starr chapter 2 . 7/16/2008
Good chapter. The encounter between Danika and Kaedan was interesting. I'm wondering what will happen next. Nice work.

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KiraLove chapter 24 . 7/10/2008
Darn, it's over? Gosh, that was good . I hope you update soon.

-Kira Love
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
Kudos on the interesting beginning. I like the thought of using Gaelic and Irish words/heritage. Nice work.

Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

Twilight Starr
Shady Spiral chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
I absolutely love this story. There are very very few stories on fictionpress that i even like, and this is one of them!
Adenosine chapter 24 . 4/28/2008
(Only forty-one reviews more to go! Unless my math is wrong, which is likely).

Nice updates. :) For a long time, I thought you had finished writing or had given up, but I understand. It's sweet to see them together.

I giggle at the Twilight allusions. Haha!
chimerica chapter 24 . 4/19/2008
YAY!

A new chapter! ...well, not exactly new but still.

Love this story and love the humor you stick in, makes me laugh so much!

Hope you update soon and win the competition!

P.S. If you can, can you tell me the fiction of your friend?
ItalianQT chapter 24 . 4/5/2008
Excellent storyso far!I cant wait see what happens now that Fionnis there! Update soon! :-)
ZED chapter 24 . 3/29/2008
SIMPLY WICKED , IM IMPRESSED WITH A BIT MORE IMPROOVEMENT YOU MIGHT GET IT PUBLISHED.

BE MORE DESCRIPTIVE OF PLACE AND SETTING WERE THINGS ARE TAKING PLACE.

YOU COULD ALSO DESCRIBE AND SPEND MORE TIME ON THE ACTION SCENES. SOMETIMES YOU NEED TO MAKE IT MORE OBVIUS THE DANGER SOME OF THE CHARACTERS ARE IN . ALL IN ALL ONE OF THE BEST PIECES IV READ.

GOOD LUCK .
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