When i read that Garret wasn't human either I was like "YES" :D

Wow, I haven't been on fictionpress in about three months. it was great to read this chapter! wonderful job. Now i shall read the rest of them.

The suspenseful question at the end? Very irritating (in a good way).

did we have an anorexic Solas Siuloir or what? is Danika this sick for not been "eating" as she should? aw! want to know! :S again I can only imagin how your days are :s I have been very bussy this last couple of weeks also, and the readers in my blogs screeam for updates (or life signals at that) so I understandu u any way! great chapter I liked it a lot! keep going

Great chapter! I really hope Danika will be alright, and that Kaedan can help her. I think erasing Jessie's memory was a smart move, though I'm not quite sure she'll let go of this particular incident. I'm really anxious to know exactly what Danika was doing that she shouldn't have done now.

The secret is really irritating. Way to keep your readers in looks for updates.

I absolutly love this story. Keep up the good work and update soon!

I was shoicked to fint that kaedan isn't following his own advice and I'm dying for Danika to find it I'm sure that she would be so angry! yay! I love the story and sorry for taking me sol long to review since this week I have been having a toon of work! as usual a great chappter!

Good chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

As usual, this chapter is astounding. I apologize for the late review.

The fight scenes were exquisite. I could imagine the chaos of the battle clearly. I don't think I could have written it better.

The aftermath of the fight was nicely done. The mood was pensive with a hint of relief.

Kaedan's inner monologue left me slightly disappointed as I knew that was the truth, but I'm still hoping for a few tender moments. For now, it seems that will be set aside-which is perfectly fine considering the situation.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Another good chapter; getting to read them together again was nice. :)

I like that you manage to fit in a little sarcastic comedy in between serious moments. That's always good, in my opinion.

Keep up the good work. P

Great chapter! Can't wait the next one!

.Gosh. I love this story. All the mystical, supernatural stuff, plus the Gaelic? Holy... I love Irish stuff. My mom lived there for two-ish years, so it's kinda her fault, but... This is an amazing story. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Squee! Such a wonmderful chaptter I love it it was so intense YAY! Go danika! aww I really love it, lots of actions and well lots of all surprises and fight and they are togheter again, and yeah they probably should stop making rules since they brake them in the following 12 hours. And the Falochu and the snakes are suspecting well lucky danika that they aren't going to take tea together and put 2 and 2 togheter but well I mean how much can they keep it secret? any way superb Chappter begging for moree!

Great chapter! Lots of action. I liked Danika's question about the tooth fairy. You have a wry sense of humor that I really like. Plus, the Gaelic is amazing, though I'm only understanding it because of your translations. It looks very pretty, and I can imagine how beautiful it would sound.