Oh my gosh. I am running SO late this morning but I couldn't resist leaving a review immediately, haha. This is a fantastic story! It feels like it's been ages since I've read a decent fantasy story, especially on the internet, so I'm just... so happy right now.

I'm not a great reviewer, unfortunately, so all I can really say is that I love your writing. The characters were engaging and relatable, the pacing struck a nearly perfect balance (I tend to like things a touch slower, but that's really not at all important in this case), and this might be the first time I haven't immediately wanted to call b.s. on two people falling so deeply in love after only a week. That usually ruins stories for me, but even when I realized it had been a week, it simply didn't occur to me that there was anything wrong. Like I knew it wasn't realistic, exactly, but it fit so perfectly and was written so gracefully that I believed anyway.

Excellent, excellent work! :)

So I started with your other story... and then I got around to reading this one... and they're both fabulous. Take as long as you want, I'm completely content with what you've written so far... but, y'know, you're such a good writer and all that... it'd just be such a shame if you didn't exercise your creativity in the form of more writing. Just occasionally. Or when you feel moved. Or more often then that. No pressure though... ;) Still, you're awesome, your story's awesome, and your level of education is also frightfully impressive. Good job!

Well welcome back! I can't quite remember what this story was about but I remember liking it very much. I need to reread it. Can't wait for you to post more of the story sounds excellent.

This is super good! :D

Great endind! Really sweet and all. It was a really good story. Very different from the things that people are writing in supernatural lately. Thanks.

YAY! I was afraid this story was only half finished and it was u0pdated like a while ago xD But I'm glad its finished! If your still alive Ill probably read the sequel

AWESOME! I will so be looking forward to the sequel! You rock! Total kudos to you for a fabulous story and can't wait to see what happens next! See you!

OMG! I have one more chapter then I'm done with the story! WAH! I've very much enjoyed this story and can't wait to see how it ends!

Yay! They defeated the enemies, like I knew they would! Kind of confusing. Needs a lot of polishing up, but good. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

OMG! What's going to happen now? How are they going to get out of this? Guess I'm going to have to read!

Oh, shit, no! It's a demon and a very powerful one, too! And thank god, it's not her father! Stupid Kaedan, the whole reason Danika screamed your name was to keep you away from the House of Death! Oh, no, how are they going to survive this?

HOLY SHIT! You just dropped the biggest bomb on us! So that's who's been behind all the bad stuff? That's DANIKA'S BIOLOGICAL FRIKKIN FATHER? OMG! The drama never ends! And he kind of made me think of Aro from 'Twilight'. All calm and charming but totally evil. Great job! Have to read more!

Oh, no! Ethan & Annemarie are dead and/or dying? And what exactly is after Kaedan, Fionn, Garrett, and Danika? What's going on? And how will they defeat this thing if it can kill whatever and whoever opposes it without lifting a finger! Something is definately not right and let's hope our characters can make everything AOK!

OMG! The world is exploding! In this story, and in LOST. Sorry, couldn't help but mention LOST. So things should get better, right? Right?

OMG! What is going on? I'm like Jessie now, wondering what the heck is happening with this story? It's gotten complicated, confusing, and very much like my favorite show, LOST, which is a good thing. It's good to keep people on their toes. Just magnificent writing. I don't want this story to end!