Reviews for Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Happiness
crazygirrl chapter 5 . 5/29/2007
I love this story. The characters are quirky and interesting. The only advice I could give to improve the story is that you need to check the spelling and grammar.
xXxMoonlitexXx chapter 5 . 5/29/2007
i'm so jealous of Kendra! i mean she's not real but like i would be if she was real because she has this super hot guy after her!
miz priss chapter 5 . 5/29/2007
The character's soo out there, had a good laugh.
FHJL88 chapter 5 . 5/28/2007
Great Story!

Update soon.
Miz Em chapter 5 . 5/26/2007
Hehe, I love this story! Kendra is awesome and hilarious. I feel like the other characters haven't really been characterized enough yet however.. mostly Kendra's friends and brother. But that might just be me, I dunno if it was supposed to be that way so the story could focus on just Kendra and Doente, or sumthin. The best thing you do is add little details that make it interesting, like the part where she carries her shoe to Stella's house. I'm looking forward to more so keep up the good work! _
Peachie Miss chapter 5 . 5/26/2007
I don't have much to say but lmao. Please continue soon!
ihrtbks chapter 5 . 5/26/2007
I LOVE THIS STORY! You can speak French and Spanish and English? Is Stella's name pronounced the Spanish way or the English way? I like Deonte's little bro...he's cute.

UPDATE SOON!
kstar129 chapter 5 . 5/26/2007
I'm gonna press the button!But first

A. I LOVE this story

B.I LOVE the two main characters

C.I LOVE cheese

D. I got my bags of cheese open

E. u need tp make more soon
kstar129 chapter 4 . 5/26/2007
The bag of cheese wasn't open!I want a cookie too!And popcorn! But I have a sprie so I'm good with soda!I LOVE THIS! I'm gonna press the button!
kstar129 chapter 3 . 5/26/2007
i like clicking buttons!Yhis is so cool! I love it!Its perfect! I LOVE cheese! I'm eating cheese right I need to get more coz I just ran out!I'm back!I got my cheese!It's very yummy!I'm gonna click the button now!
kstar129 chapter 2 . 5/26/2007
! SO FUNNY!I LOVE this girl!She is so like me! Keep up with the perfect work!
kstar129 chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
I like this girl she's like me!I love Fergalicious!
DeLuvLee chapter 5 . 5/26/2007
At first when I started reading this it seemed to "much". Kendra just came off as severly ADD and an out of touch with reality. It was hard reading it, but it comes off different. I don't know where you're going with it, but I'm glad you updated. I'm curious to see what your intentions for her are.
Pinkamoo chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
Oh! You have a blonde Kelly too! Heh, nice story!
FHJL88 chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
Oh yeah I love her name. (my name is also Kendra)
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