aww it's cute but I still think Daniel needs to do a LOT more grovelling D I LOVE your stories

Aw! Absolutely great chapter. Perfect. Can't write much more, I have a cuddly cat wanting to sit on my laptop. ;) There will be an epilogue, right?

I love this story! :)

His hand dropped away from his eyes, and he looked up at her. “You’re standing,” he said, blinking. “You’re standing and I’m sitting and –” He stood. “Forgive me, I –”

“Oh, Daniel, for goodness sake, there is no one around to care.”

“I care.” When she huffed impatiently, he added, “You are my future wife, and I ought to treat you with the respect and courtesy you deserve.”

That is my favorite part and some of the best lines of fiction I have ever read! Bravo! I also like how he knew he NEEDED to grovel! Thanks for a great update.

I really like what you have written so far and am looking forward to reading more.

Yay for happy endings!

man a sad end to andrew! i thought he was a pig before, but too bad he died with so much guilt. well, it opens the door for daniel...

Whoa. As much as I disliked Andrew, I didn't want him to die. But now that I think about it, there isn't all that much that could have happened so Daniel could be with Caroline. Loved it though :D

Update soon!

~Mia

Oh man... Good chapter. It was so sad. But I guess I got what I asked for, didn't I? Poor Andrew. And Daniel and Caroline. I can't wait to read more.

Oh God. Did he have to die? *sigh* Good writing continue!

I'm relieved he knows the truth now, but it's too bad he never made restitution to Caroline. Also, please don't let Caroline immediately forgive Daniel. He needs to grovel; a lot! Thanks for the update!

aw man that stupid man had to die... well that is a fitting punishment I guess... so sad and now Daniel better do something insane to win back Caroline... I mean REALLY insane cause he was such a bleh and everything to caroline... Well anyways update son... can't wait to see what happens next D

Huh, I didn't quite Andrew to die but to recover... well written as always and look forward to the next!

Lol! Poor Andrew, I thought he'd drag on for a little longer.

I loved the lines,

“I think you’re a bastard.”

“Don’t be ridiculous. Mother would never do that.”

Quick witted dialogue is wonderful. Have you ever read anything by Georgette Heyer?

Mel

That was sad. But at least now Daniel knows the truth.

man, i was reading it and going what great language - reminds me of jane austen!