Reviews for Eighteen
Mairi Cross chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
Wow, I really like that you're going in a different direction with this one-and it's pretty good right now, too. I realize I've reviewed everything you have on here already *blush*. Sorry about that. :)

Yeah, research is a killer, I dont' envy you. But I've always been fascinated with history so I can't wait to hear more?

The only suggestion I have is that maybe the line, "but then he realized that everyone learned to grow up in Vietnam," might be a bit too...I dont' know. Cliche? Melodramatic? Something. I like the premise of the whole line, especially the first part of the sentence, but you might be a tad more subtle. Really nothing, though, in the big picture. Looking forward to your next post! :)
safelysound chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
i love this idea.