|Reviews for touched|
| meowsha chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
I love the whole thing, very beautiful order of strung words.
although, the last two lines.. seem a little... out of line - to me anyway.
But I do fancy "Careful with your heart
around me, dear.
I deliver cruelty,
but dress it up pretty
in honesty's clothes."
That's definately my favourite verse.
Very well done.
Keep it up and take care,