Reviews for Continuum
dorome chapter 6 . 6/29/2009
Until i read your story i thought Magnus Bane (i hope you know this character, if not i am sure you will like him) is the only gay wizzard/warlock i could fall for. But know i have to confess there is a second one!

Thanks so much for your storys, i enjoyed them both (the charade and this one) so much.

I cann't wait for the epilogue. Great work!
kepteinen chapter 5 . 3/5/2009


Pretty please.
alterius chapter 5 . 1/18/2009
Poor Damonica... I sympathise her a lot, she's innocent about the whole issue and she's dragged into the situation like this, hurt without cause. I hate myself for saying this, but this chapter made me realize how selfish Cerasus actually is, that he'd ignore how Damonica felt, and everything, and planned the course of action solely for the good of him and Calcifex. On a side note, I'd really love to see if you could weave the gypsy witch into your main plot sooner or later, because she'd make a very interesting character, and perhaps be a major plot twister - but I trust your wonderful creativity enough to formulate wonderful plot and that was nothing but a suggestion, don't let it hinder you, if it doesn't seem to work for you (:

Seriously, you need to approach some film/anime company to make this into film, because it's simply too awesome a piece of work to remain only in a website like this - it needs to reach a larger audience, your amazing work! Still, I understand that it'd be extremely difficult too, due to the homosexuality involved in this story, as well as the mature themes. Sigh, screw the general public!

Nevertheless, this is a freaking amazing piece of work! Do please find ways to publicise it! :D
tiny lights chapter 5 . 12/13/2008
you're such an amazing writer! :) i think continuum and the charade are my favourite stories on fictionpress at the moment. your characters are lovely, and your writing is impeccable. please update soon!
Rachizzle chapter 5 . 11/8/2008
Haha, I remember reading the review I had posted right after I reviewed the last time. ;P And I, too, lol'd when you made the mistake of typing "Calficex" in the last chapter, haha. lolsex. So, after this chapter, I like Damonica. There really wasn't much told about her until this chapter, so, yeah. I can't wait to see what happens with Flamma-Regi... oh, and Calcifex's dad! Woot.
freak1012000 chapter 5 . 11/6/2008
OMG! Update! *does happy dance*

This chapter was amazing! I'm still saddened by Siderus' death, but I'm so happy that things are (sort of) looking for for Cali and Cerasus. I also like how Cera let Damonica down easy. Being her right now must be hard, eh? Imagine no one wanting you anymore...but Cera was so sweet about it!

Oh...and I hope Flamma-regi gets inexplicably tortured at some death is too good for her...*stabs voodoo doll of Flamma-regi*
vampirezombieduck chapter 4 . 10/18/2008


sadly i have to admit i nearly forgot about your story .

update soon?

*bribes* XD

I cant believe she's pregnant

I hate the queen then again i think everyone does,hopefully they get a happy ending and she dies in a ditch somewhere D
it didnt rain chapter 4 . 10/12/2008
Brilliant bit of writing. I loved The Charade and I am thoroughly enjoying this. I'm looking forward to reading more, and seeing where you take it.

(Also, Sid was one of my favorites too. Very sad, but I agree-you had to do it.)
dolly-dear chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
Ohh.. I don't think I can really say anything. It's very, very sad though. I am glad to see that you've updated it finally, though. I cannot wait for more!
freak1012000 chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
OMG! An update! It has been too long! But this chapter is so worth it.

If you DID have any grammar or spelling errors, I didn't notice them. i was too caught up in the drama unfolding in the story.

I feel so sorry for Cali...

I actually DID cry while reading it, you know.

I do hope you'll update quite soon...I'll die if you don't continue.

And may the fair light spirit rest in peace...
Fisi Mtimia chapter 4 . 9/28/2008
You killed him! *Is still in shock* You killed Sidereus!
Rachizzle chapter 4 . 9/28/2008
I can't remember what the heck my last review was to make you mention Ursula in your review reply, but, WHATEVER.

;~; R.I.P. Sidereus. ;~; Hmm... be careful not to invite the wrath of the spirit... that must mean something's gonna happen. New character, too? HM, MAYBE SIDEREUS WILL COME BACK AS A HUMAN. When the heck are Calcifex and Cerasus gonna be together again? ;~;
rosenotrosie chapter 3 . 8/6/2008
terribly, terribly sad, but very well written. I do hope that this will somehow end happily, but I can see that that's going to be rather difficult. (sigh) You've done a wonderful job with the story, can't wait to see what happens next.
vampirezombieduck chapter 3 . 6/8/2008
update soon?
Invalid chapter 3 . 4/10/2008
So.. you've got me wrapped up in your story now. .

You are planning to update soon yes? *cough* You know.. just wondering.
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