Reviews for Why?
The Angel in Black chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
Aw, I really like this one. I know exactly how that feels. Right on; good stuff!
Gabster90 chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
This is great. Don't worry, someone will come along.
amythestpony chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
beautifully sad and well writtem :)
hikaruslight chapter 2 . 4/18/2007
second chapter is acually better than the first (my opinion) I only had trouble with two lines. the first line ending with 'lucid'. i don't know if it's me but it just seemed like an odd time for vocab. but it's cool. another thing was "Why did I heat?" did you mean like blushing?

good work! keep it up!
hikaruslight chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
it's pretty good. the only thing that gets me is the ending. I don't know if there was some reason you ended it saying 'only' instead of 'why' but it doesn't really seem to fit with the rest of the poem.

other than that, good work! keep it up! (for both of us!)