Reviews for ender
Liam02 chapter 20 . 7/7/2007
...You amaze me.

You've taken a plot, a twisted story so bleak, hopeless in itself and made it beautiful. The short, poetic chapters are verses in themselves. Did you write this originally in verse form? Christ, that was good. The best thing I've read on here, no joke.

The story weaves itself so well in the twisted mind of this girl that you eventually can't wait for the next chapter because it feels like YOUR HER. Which is awkward for me, because I'm a guy. The way you write an EMOTION is incredible... have you had your work published before? Your songs? Your sense of timing and emotion is amazing. I'm not going to say much else, because I'm just gonna sound like a derranged admirer.

Check out my stuff? Ignore the summaries, I suck ass at summaries.
dog problems chapter 5 . 5/29/2007
This is fantastic. The short chapters are annoying but it kind of adds to this; like the narrator is living this all disjointedly and can't really connect it all. I'm probably reading too much into it but hey, that's what I do. :]

So, um... [fav]

- Colleen
Tytherpol chapter 15 . 5/29/2007
this is good.

i like three the best,

but they're all good.

i like how it ends, too-

good job..