Reviews for Gift of the Sea
xxxxxxxxxxx chapter 2 . 6/5/2009
Wow! This is really great! You had me sucked into the story. I really want to know what happens. Keep writing.

The only bad thing is that it's kind of boring. Not enough to get me to stop reading; it only seems like that because of the lack of dialogue. Anyway, love the story so far, keep writing, I beg of you!
Stella Grimshaw chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
Interesting beginning. Thanks for the reviews.
Agapantha chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
Hey, a good first chapter, it wasn't an action filled, dramatic opening, but it didn't have to be. I loved the opening descriptions.


P.s. Are you still carrying on with Nyx? I haven't read a new chapter in a long while.
Patrick McGill chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
I can't give a very good review, because of the size of this snippet, but I have to say that your use of language is good. You color up your paragraphs with very imaginative phrasing, so it retains interest for the reader.

I can't wait to read more.