It was kind of weird to read this story considering my name is Cheyenne, but i got over it and i have to say i love this story, youre a great writer.

I just finished chapter 4 but i really like how u portray everything.

and tht ur story isnt just another pointless boy meets girl boy and girl fall inlove and happily ever after. u actually have some real issues that cheyenne has to deal with.

Good chapter,

Arupa

This was such an amazing story! I hope the sequel comes soon!

You should definitely have Zack and Cheyenne get together. :)

Oh my gosh, my eyes are seriously getting moist! I don't want Dante to die!

You're really good at building up tension! I can't believe I'm almost done reading this. It's an amazing adventure. ]

wow this is a pretty good story! i love it! anyways...

just stumbled upon this. pretty good chapter if long random side-tracked monologues are your thing...but I think i will pass though. tis awesome that they drive an El Camino!

So your story is making me laugh.. Do you really believe that the only people that went to Vietnam were the poor poverty stricken families of the US? Because if you do you are seriously mistaken. And most "hippies" didnt go to college.. they sat around and smoked a bunch of weed.. nice try though.. And you really need to look up the history on the Vietnam "conflict".. and Rap is NOT the new rock and roll of this generation.. soo yeah... no...

I really hate to say it but.. Your story is going downhill. I mean, the chapters are getting WAY short, and there's no good plot to it anymore. It's pointless babble about Ari, Dante and Adam now..

I really like this! I still have a few chapters to work my way through, but I will write a longer review when I have caught up. Keep writing :)

rcb x

Wicked story ;D

HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!

You said for people to correct(ish) if they found mistakes...and when you said Mia was from Austen, I'm assuming you meant from Austin, Texas not Austen...but it was good I'm looking forward to the other chapters.

wow!

this story is awsome,

chapter 29 made me cry..because im a crybaby.

but this story is amazing.

you're a great writer.

sorry I haven't reviewed, but I got so into it..and you know.

anywayy...awsome job!

update soon!

I wanna know what happens.

love how the story is coming. update more often! i'm surprosed you havent gotten more reviews on this, its so rare to see one son long with so little reviews! keep on ...writing? :3

Wow really good story. I know what it's like top be moved around alot and it really sucks. So i understand how she feels

Keep writing

-Genesis F.T