Reviews for May Church Bells Remind You
Black Viper chapter 4 . 7/19/2007
lucretiabaine chapter 3 . 6/16/2007
I like this story a lot! But scrap the character list at the beginning. Your readers can figure it out on their own. Anyway. Keep up the good work! :]
Black Viper chapter 3 . 6/16/2007
Really cool!

Both justin and Rae seem totally cool..
ku chapter 3 . 6/16/2007
I don't like how you've just dumped all the characters on the reader at the beginning in one go. It's like forcing a giant turkey into someone's mouth instead of chopping it up into smaller pieces.

The perspectives shifting abrupting from one person to another I find is something you might want to work on. It's good to let the reader slowly familiarize himself or herself with one perspective before moving on to another.
DRAGONFIRE04 chapter 3 . 6/15/2007
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like this story. You should make rae and justin have a school project to work on.
DRAGONFIRE04 chapter 2 . 5/12/2007
Good story. Keep it coming.
phon chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
A bit short, but this seems like it's going to be a good read. I love Raene's name Update soon!
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