Reviews for Fly
Temeraire chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
Beautiful. I like how you incorporated the title directly into the haiku. Don't see that around nowadays.

Hm. Are you implying that the dreams are the things that fly? I can't tell, though I suppose it would make sense...

Again, it's beautiful. Good job.

Basara chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
F.L.Y -initials... ouch...

Patrick McGill chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
Ah, clever. This is interesting, but I can only guess at its core meaning.
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
Your other two reviews before this summed it up pretty nicely. Very cleer and creative.
EmilyAlice10 chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
This is realy good. I like how you got the title from the first letter of each line, but how it always realates in a way to the poem. Onyl thing I'd like to say is the lilnes are a little choppy, like you just put a word in to get the extra syllable, but it still sounds good. good job!
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
I love the two conflicting views here. I love the title. It just creates a new picture in the poem as I read it. Great job, God bless.