|Reviews for Cockroach|
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
Nice comparison. I never thought about that before.
| Dehydrated Hyena chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
Don't waste words. The image of you wearing your skin as your bones and the idea of unloved and content make the idea of a cockroach clear. You don't need the "just like a cockroach." Use the first line to further develop your ideas. Still, even keeping the first line as it is, this poem is phenomenal. The image that you've built, what you do with the implications of a cockroach and your ability to communicate all that in such few words is really, really good. I'm impressed. :)
| Mrstress chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
This haiku is great,
(How many reviews do you get in haiku? :P It's very good. Keep writing :D)
| Sakka-Fenikkusu chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Has a certain beauty to it. The contrast of contentedness and living 'just like a cockroach' makes this a piece to be remembered. Excellent job.
| embarrassing-bs chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
unloved and content
two very different things.
but it fit in the poem as a whole.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
Oh, wow, that is a fantastic haiku. Completely original and heartbreaking, and the images conjured up make me think. Wonderful work. Keep writing! :)
| Basara chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
The second line is just gold. True and fitting and oh so cute.
| Kat Pegasus chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
I love the imagery that you used. Very unique!