Reviews for When The Wind Blow
antigonelives chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
Good poem with true emotion and imagery; I liked it!

Though your title did say "when the wind blow," which should be "blows." In the second line, you used the wrong its/it's (should be "it's") and "minute" has a typo. Just thought I'd let you know.

Great job!

CareKisses chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
wow i really like this poem . great job!