|Reviews for The Path Less Traveled|
| Lifeshade chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
Oh my goodness those last two lines are genius. So very amazing. :)
| bunny.one.three chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
"The ground there is uneven, filled with
ruts to make you fall, take away your hope
I soon found out, the hard way
As I continued my journey…alone"
I think... it sounds a bit awkward there.
It's a good poem... the last line was the best.
| rachelraj88 chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
but reaching towards what you've learn to be unique is beinng different from the others,
the least travelled road can teach us patience, trust and love,
it is not easy to go against the flow of the world but whenever you reach the end, you somehow will feel satisfied because you have a differenht story to tell people about the pathe you travelled.
| GreenField chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
I love it. I think a lot of people will relate to this. I love how your portraying the idea of this poem and not sounding complicated. Well done.
| Chasing Skylines chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Wow, I liked the conclusion; it wrapped it up, and provided imagery.
I disliked the 'UNIQUE!' thing, it was pretty sudden and out of sync with the rest. Unless you wanted it that way? Also, the rhyming scheme was pretty off at times; it didn't seem to follow a particular pattern at all.
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| Azena Kira chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
I overall really liked the poem. It was great.
However, I found it odd that just a few lines rhymed, then it went back to free verse. So yeah, I thought that was weird...
A line I had a little problem with is where you put "UNIQUE!" I thought it was a little distracting...
Other than those, yeah I really liked the poem overall.
| Lurid Black chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
Sweet, really well written:
'The ground there is uneven, filled with
ruts to make you fall, take away your hope'
Sweet lines, really well thought up, keep writing!
| Gingitsune-chan chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
Er... I like your overall voice. The tone of it is insightful... Did you get inspiration from Robert Frost? Perhaps mocking what he once said about a "Road less Traveled?"
| scotti chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
Ah, but when you turn around take a long look at how far you've traveled...the trials that you've over come...look at how much stronger you've become because you were brave enough to take the path less traveled...the narrow path.
Beautiful piece, Chaos. I did get a little chuckle at the last line...nice touch/play on words.
| Counting Petals chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
Ha, I liked the pun in the last line. )
| brightlywound93 chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
loneliness and broken SOLES lol.. I like this..it's hard to be unique, isnt it?
| The Monkey King of Pirates chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
Beautifully said, as always!
I am going to add it to my favs and to my C2!