Reviews for My World
abe11a chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
I like this poem. For some reason it reminds of Shel Silverstein’s Invitation from Where the Sidewalk Ends.
Azena Kira chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
Great poem, I really loved it.
peteygirl chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
yay! thank you for inviting me! and i've just arrived thank you. : )
Nemonus chapter 1 . 4/25/2007
Pretty good. Too peaceful for me, honestly, but the rhythm is pretty good. Sometimes the rhymes seem forced.
brightlywound93 chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
It's great to have an escape from the rest of the world! Nice job.

Kali chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
If that's the case, I want to be in your world. Ha ha. Look! Pure dishonesty. I say "ha ha" and "lol" and I don't even laugh. Gr. I should just listen to Josh Groban and stop reviewing people.
The Monkey King of Pirates chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
Very pretty! He! He! It is I, Hidden Sword of Truth...

A.K.A. Tiffany Pradeep!

You always do a beautiful job!

Kayla Pich chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
that's really good

short and sweet

Keep going! :]