Reviews for Forfeit
Substitute Brain chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
Wow, so many lines that just flow. My favs: the longer you don't give in, the better it is when you do.

Really great.
continuous brevity chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
wow, i loved it. my favorite lines were:

"Been a while since I've felt this high,

Been a while since I've been this low." great.

wonderful job with this.