|Reviews for flat lines|
| born blue chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
kb. im sitting here with you in art class. i love the way this comes together, especially in the last lines. and i really like "purity and purpose, pleading capillaries-carmine red"
you are fab.
| she smolders chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
The alliteration in "vaporous and vapid" and the rhyme in "you who singed me, you who cringed" really emphasis the feelings of hurt in this. But it's the last line that breaks my heart. Take care.
| continuous brevity chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
wow, i loved this. great imagery and word choice. a favorite.