Reviews for Make Me Believe Myself
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
Wow, especially the lines 'I don’t love you anymore because

The sunshine dried up my infatuation'

Yepp. that's good stuff. Also good description of the eyes at the beginning.
Frames of Insight chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
Fantastic! You expressed your feelings so vividly that I took a moment of silence and deep breath at the end. You have a way with words, most definitely.
a beautiful somewhere chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
I can't say enough how much I love the way you paint pictures with words.

"Fade into unflattering colorful bruises

Of bloodshot pink and tongue tied red..."

Simply beautiful.
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
This is beautiful. Lovely job.

How did you get spaces in between your stanzas without putting dashings? Teach me your ways.

MySweetPrince chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
Added to my favourites, really beautifully written and totally love it. The details so vivid and waw lol x