Reviews for variations on a theme: sunshine
perdita's kiss chapter 3 . 9/11/2007
oh honey honey firstly thank you for the review

but more importantly

your writing is trans-fucking-scendent

i envy you

keep writing forever and ever and change bad days around and around up again
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
M, what a beautiful piece. I can't believe I haven't read your work before. Crazy. My favorite bits were "a summer mix of salt and heat and earth" for those great sense elements, and then "honey-streams of honesty," because that's just gorgeous. Beautiful. I'll be watching out for more from you. Keep writing! :)
hide your eyes chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
"i close my eyes until it slips back down my throat"

Teva'ni-Britagne chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Oh this was the sweetest prettiest little poem I ever did read. Wonderful dear.

- QoS
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
beautiful, I love it. Keep up the great work.

slow cheetah chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
god. you leave me speechless. :]

you are so poetic and I love it.

in case you didn't know...

it's Laura. xD
Crossing the Rubicon chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
"spilling / out of me in / honey-streams of honesty" are beautiful lines. I really like this. (Anberlin is one of my heroes, too. _~)