Reviews for Phenomena |
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![]() ![]() ![]() My my, is she destructive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will you be going into Noelle and her mother's relationship more deeply through the rest of the story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hockey's kind of like the most masculine sport in a lot of ways...you get away with so much more, especially beating people up, in hockey. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My favorite chapter. I'm surprised she didn't get in any trouble, though. But I guess there was no nippleage. Why is it more of a big deal when you see nipple? Anyway, I wish I were gutsy enough to do that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liquid boldness. Hmm, I like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the name Katrione. Right now my reviews are neither interesting nor informative. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So. I've been a bit behind on my reading. I actually read through the entire thing just now but I'm going back to review every chapter. I sometimes wish I were like Noelle. Or at least had a friend like her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooer nice dark twist. It's like she wants trouble. Great update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As always an extremely well written update. I like the dark twist it's taking as well... Spawny |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it ] and liam and i don't even like blonde guys. you work wonders. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think its just as good as the others. Keep updating. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another good update. I'm starting to think that short updates are a good thing with this story, as it keeps the attention easily and hits all the right spots! Spawny |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter... I can't believe she acted that way at the game, but then... I sorta can! Great style, etc. Overall great! ;D Sorry I couldn't be more detailed, but I do like it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Unusual twist. Great job so far... hope you keep updating. (and Ex. Breakfast) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is rapidly turning into a really good story. I like the pace, the character development, and everything else about it so far. Great work, keep it up... Spawny |