Reviews for we're too young
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
sad and beautiful piece
Around.about chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
Beautify sculpted.

Sad and simple, it's a stunning reminder of how we are all connected.

"we’re too young to kill

to let the hate fill

our angry hearts

to let it tear us apart"

These lines where just wonderful, absolutely mind blowing.
Frosted Midnight chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
so very sad..
classic violet chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
Brilliant. Bloody brilliant. Such a thoughtful poem. I love the second stanza especially, 'gone' and 'wrong', wonderful.


Victims of Virginia Tech.
she smolders chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
We are too young, but I don't think there's an age to ever be ready for that. Your poem sums up what I've been thinking about too.

While I was watching the story on the news, this specialist said that parents should tell their children that tradegies like that are so rare and kids shouldn't worry about it but how can it be rare if there are more and more cases of school shottings now?