Reviews for Story of my Life
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
I love how you have the title on the side making up the lines! That is so creative. Anyway, sad but good poem. I can really relate to the OF lines. Good job as always.
rira-chan chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
i loved the layout to this very good

MirrorMirrorOnTheWall chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
Brilliant as usual. I love how you always use different styles of writing.

TylerB chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
I don't see much of this style of poetry. I don't even remember the specific name for it. Anyways, I love what you did with it. Portraying all this emotion and still staying close to the structure. Great job
tearsofthefallen chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
Wow. That was awesome. The format was really cool! Good job!
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
"My mind is turning, beds are burning" - these are great lines. Excellent work. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

~Anna~ _
EmilyAlice10 chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
Very good! I liked this one! keep writing! love your poems!
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
Well, I hope your life isn't JUST that.

But the poem is great. I like these acrostics you've been doing.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
Life is hard. I can't even think right now. This was a great poem, and I can relate a lot. "My mind is turning, beds are burning/you just don't care, do you?" Those are probably my favorite lines. Great job.