Reviews for The First Kiss of Earth and Sky
trixxx chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
wow! great metaphors & writing style.

this was a joy to read.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
Cute story.

Twilight Starr
Madame Y chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
Wow... so poetic.. I love your use of colours and metaphors. Keep it up! You have painted a very magical garden
loveshouldnthurt chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
You told an entire story in just a few paragraphs if thats nto talent I dk what is.

Your descriptions are lovely.
Mienaku chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
yes well...hm...first off...i'm not mienaku...i'm Dragons Willow who is too lazy to sign out and back in again! sorry.

i really enjoyed solving the mystery of this story. why mystery? cuz i didn't get it at first. by the end i understood tho! it was a wonderful portrayal of nature! personification at its best! i loved all the uses of colors and imagery that you gave me...it was amazing! you are an awesome writer...and so i aspire to be the same. wow. i am wondering at the footsteps she, earth, was so worried about tho? and i'm sad that their romance is merely fleeting, but touched at the same time that they got their first kiss. thanks, this was a wonderful dream!
EnigmaticArsenic chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
You know, everytime I read something of yours, I've to turn off the music and do it in silence, otherwise the words refuse to string together into anything coherent or concrete.

It's amazing how much poetry you manage into your prose. And your whimsical (of dramatic, depending) depiction of romance is never campy.

This was beautiful, and that last line ended it perfectly. I love it.
ThePiracyOfHearts chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
this is beyond any praise i could give it.

absolutely beautiful.

xof
Circus chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
Thank you. Thank you, thank you, thank you! Reading something new from you is like breathing new air! I love this. The idea is beautiful, and original, and wonderful. Your writing is, as always, worthy of high praise, and makes one feel close enough to literature to touch your breathing words. You are amazing, and will never stop surprising me with your beautiful originality. Well done.
Queen of Absolutely Everything chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
This was truly beautiful. Your use of language and imagery is so incredibly vivid and eloquent. At the same time, there's a childish lilt that makes it all the more endearing. I loved it!
Shadows in the Fire chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
WONDERFUL! Though a tad on the confusing side...

-Amber