|Reviews for No Answers|
| Empty Eyes chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
I hesistate to write anything, small verse like this tend to cheat themselves, as it seems a million times the same. Don't take that as me detracting from your feelings just that lines are so typical. That is until the end. It saved your work from being completely forgettable. That last line rings hard, and speaks volumes. I think you can pull more from yourself, and generate more lasting impressions. I would even venture to say to try to generate something fresh from that one line, build on that, explain it and step away from making sure everything is neat and tidy. Love is a mess sometimes, so sometimes what you write should become a mess.