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Reviews for
Your Eyes
VanillaOreo
chapter 1 .
4/19/2007
Aww! This poem is sweet, beautiful, and touching, all at the same time! :)
Tutube
chapter 1 .
4/19/2007
Ah! I love how you describe the feeling as "an annoying annoyance". The imagery you use here is very vivid and well done. Good job )