|Reviews for Breaking The Mirror|
| P.Nutter chapter 32 . 3/19/2013
| meowkitty chapter 31 . 3/13/2013
Oh my God! this story was amazing!
i thought while i was reading it (obsessively): wow this is really good writing. you really captured emotions and made the characters come alive. it was a very unique, realistic portrayal of characters- especially jayden and seaton
when i was reading the part where seaton said that jayden just liked him because he was abused, i thought, hey, that could be true! you got me so in jayden's head that i didn't think about that being a possibility
but then i read the ending, and i thought that they definitely should be together, especially after hearing about seaton's past and the part where he shows him the mirror painting :DDDDD
Really good stories (to me) are stories that change how you see the world. from the outside, you would think seaton and jayden's relationship is wrong... but they really understand each other and love each other. i don't know if you intended this, but your story makes me think i shouldn't judge everything at face value and maybe pay more attention to feelings than facts sometimes. you know, if you get a good vibe of something and just feel it's right (i'm not making any sense lol)
anyways, great story, very emotional, very exciting, very cute!
awesome job, dude :)))))
| Crepes chapter 32 . 3/8/2013
You know, when I read the last lines of the previous chapter it felt like an ending too. And I think it's ok to end it that way, because we know that Jayden's ok, and that's really all that matters to me by the end of reading this fic. In fact, I feel more than comfortable leaving it off, because I feel that since Jayden's finally feels accepted and loved he'll start to grow more self-confident. And his internal thoughts already show he's not a pushover, but just that he's been trained to act timid, and now he finally has the room to grow and throw off the restraints. In the future he'll be telling all sorts of lesbians they're psychotic :D
| Crepes chapter 8 . 3/6/2013
"For now? Forever."
OMG, this is too funny. I just laughed out loud in my office and couldn't stop giggled for a full minute. :D I really love your writing style!
| k chapter 32 . 2/12/2013
I really wish there was more, but that was a beautiful story and I kind of understand why you wanted to end it there. It just seemed resolved. An epilogue might be nice though.
| R. Ficst chapter 32 . 2/9/2013
Wonderful writing. You clearly put a lot of time and effort into this creation and it came out splendidly. The characters feel real, and the narration choices were spot on.
Thank you so much for posting, I enjoyed reading very much.
| Phayre chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Ooh, naughty, naughty. Language, darlin'.
I like your plot idea, and title idea whatchamacallit. That is a stroke of genius.
| Maria chapter 32 . 1/20/2013
Btw I love all the characters they where all funny and special and I was surprised when seaton said he was a cop because he is so young and doesnt seem like the type, but I lovee him anyways! And jayden is ADORABLE lol I just fell inlove with the chatacters! All my love -Maria
| Maria chapter 32 . 1/20/2013
When I first started reading the story which was yesterday you had 1,999 I wad so excited to be 2,000 but sadly someone beat me too it, your story made me smile, lagh, and cry. you had alot of misspelled letters and some words didnt make sense but I was able to read it anyways, when you talked about the paintings I completly understood even though seaton wasnt paiting actual paintings of jayden he was painting his emotions instead, I love your story and look forward to reading more of your stories, im not upset thats its over because I always tell myself I cant cling on too the characters and as the saying goes all good things have to come to an end thankyou for writing this story, sorry if the review is late I recently started reading stories of fictionpress when you wrote this I was 7 years old im 13 nowxD I know im too young to be a yaoi fangirl but my friend got me interested it all started with animexD anyways all my love -Maria
| Itsa Mia chapter 32 . 1/20/2013
| Itsa Mia chapter 31 . 1/20/2013
That was slightly creepy but in a normal way because people have weird minds. the real creeps act on those minds.
| Itsa Mia chapter 28 . 1/19/2013
that was the most beautiful make out session I've ever read o_o o_e o_o
| Itsa Mia chapter 27 . 1/19/2013
tears of like every emotion right now
| Itsa Mia chapter 20 . 1/19/2013
you are so good at this.
| Itsa Mia chapter 17 . 1/19/2013
my heart sobbed for a good 3/5ths of the chapter. just letting you know you did it right lol