Reviews for Breaking The Mirror
Crepes chapter 8 . 3/6/2013
"For now? Forever."

OMG, this is too funny. I just laughed out loud in my office and couldn't stop giggled for a full minute. :D I really love your writing style!
k chapter 32 . 2/12/2013
I really wish there was more, but that was a beautiful story and I kind of understand why you wanted to end it there. It just seemed resolved. An epilogue might be nice though.
R. Ficst chapter 32 . 2/9/2013
Wonderful writing. You clearly put a lot of time and effort into this creation and it came out splendidly. The characters feel real, and the narration choices were spot on.
Thank you so much for posting, I enjoyed reading very much.
Phayre chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Ooh, naughty, naughty. Language, darlin'.

I like your plot idea, and title idea whatchamacallit. That is a stroke of genius.
Maria chapter 32 . 1/20/2013
Btw I love all the characters they where all funny and special and I was surprised when seaton said he was a cop because he is so young and doesnt seem like the type, but I lovee him anyways! And jayden is ADORABLE lol I just fell inlove with the chatacters! All my love -Maria
Maria chapter 32 . 1/20/2013
When I first started reading the story which was yesterday you had 1,999 I wad so excited to be 2,000 but sadly someone beat me too it, your story made me smile, lagh, and cry. you had alot of misspelled letters and some words didnt make sense but I was able to read it anyways, when you talked about the paintings I completly understood even though seaton wasnt paiting actual paintings of jayden he was painting his emotions instead, I love your story and look forward to reading more of your stories, im not upset thats its over because I always tell myself I cant cling on too the characters and as the saying goes all good things have to come to an end thankyou for writing this story, sorry if the review is late I recently started reading stories of fictionpress when you wrote this I was 7 years old im 13 nowxD I know im too young to be a yaoi fangirl but my friend got me interested it all started with animexD anyways all my love -Maria
Itsa Mia chapter 32 . 1/20/2013
tears D;
Itsa Mia chapter 31 . 1/20/2013
That was slightly creepy but in a normal way because people have weird minds. the real creeps act on those minds.
Itsa Mia chapter 28 . 1/19/2013
that was the most beautiful make out session I've ever read o_o o_e o_o
Itsa Mia chapter 27 . 1/19/2013
tears of like every emotion right now
Itsa Mia chapter 20 . 1/19/2013
you are so good at this.

Itsa Mia chapter 17 . 1/19/2013
my heart sobbed for a good 3/5ths of the chapter. just letting you know you did it right lol
Itsa Mia chapter 14 . 1/19/2013
Mr Spencer made me want to cry. It's always nice to remember that some people are just plain good. (please don't change my opinion of him lol)
Itsa Mia chapter 5 . 1/19/2013
I love Jayden ;_; apart from him being sweet, he's got this little flame inside him that's ready to burn the house dow. brilliant. he's resigned, yes, but only because he doesn't let himself hope to be free, but i think he realizes that one day he will be, and that's why that flame is there. I think too much. you're actually really lucky. I usually just read, but getting me to review when a story is complete means i love it :D
Itsa Mia chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
Jayden is really sweet ;_; Stupid Alfred. he deserves to die of extreme flatulence.
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