Reviews for When an Angel Falls
elisefey chapter 2 . 1/9/2008
I like that you use French in the story. Very cool. That sucks about Gabriella's step-father beating her though.

David amuses me and you have really cool names for the seekers.
Grey of Solitude chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
If I was a character in this story, I would be either an angel, Untrained, or Seer. Cool story. Mace is officially my favorite character.
Shadowed and Shattered chapter 2 . 12/30/2007
Well, well, well. That's a nice twist. I liked this chapter as well. I'm slightly repetitive, yay me. More characters, which is always good. Well done.
Shadowed and Shattered chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
I like this story so far. The plot seems very well thought out, and Gabriella seems like a strong character. Good work so far. :D
elisefey chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
Yay! I've finally had a moment to sit down and read some of your stuff! Gosh, I've had this on my "to review" list for friggin ever...

Anyway, I like the fact that Gabriella is blind and just basically not the typical heroine; but she still comes across as very strong and capable. The world in your story is full of fun characters. I enjoyed how non-chalant Mace is when telling Gabriella that she should be terrified of him.

The scar is an intriguing mystery; I'm just as curious about how he got it as Gabriella is.
Hoodwynk chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
Just saying objectively, does Gaby really have a fascination with drakness. At the end, she throws her hands up in the air and says that she doesn't want anything to do with it all.
Hoodwynk chapter 9 . 12/20/2007
Jane Austin would kill you for saying that peace is a boring thing. Domestic drama was what she thrived on. And I love the ending in which she drops everything. It is a very different message then the fight for what is right thing that most heroes have going on. And lastly, I liked that Gaby told her that you just have to try with your heart, that she didn't have to be perfect- just sincere. I think this was the best chapter.
Hoodwynk chapter 8 . 12/20/2007
Hmm. Okay, better character development for a girl who isn't big on detail. And the little extra explanation did wonders.
Hoodwynk chapter 7 . 12/20/2007
This is one of your more hectic peices. However, I'm glad to see that Gaby wasn't your patent character. Everything didn't revolve around her.
Hoodwynk chapter 5 . 12/18/2007
Good one. It was a bit rushed, but the point was still clear. I think.
Hoodwynk chapter 4 . 12/18/2007
It seems like you were watching Charmed during this episode. I like that she is blind and unafraid.
Tears of Deathwishxxx chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
I am continuously intrigued by your writing style. So Gabriella has no fear of the magical community because she is blind. Continue writing.
Destroyer Penguin chapter 9 . 11/11/2007
I was slightly confused at first, but it all turned out really nicely at the end. The web of people, Gabriella, Walker, Chase, Mace, Dr. Sanders, Caderyn, Savannah, Edward, etc., the way everyone related to each other had me mixed up for about fifteen minutes, and then I figured it out. Very good plot, and . . . yeah, it's a really cool story! Keep on writing, I think you've got a gift for it.
His Mercy's Waiting chapter 9 . 11/8/2007
Hm...a bit disorganized, but a very interesting story indeed. Ah yes, I did love the twist.

Keep writing!
His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Hmm...nice start. You tend to use too many speaking verbs (i.e. said, announced, asked) though. You don't need one every time someone speaks.

Keep writing.
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