Reviews for My Sister's Story
Nathaniel G chapter 20 . 5/21/2013
It was a different perspective. I like it.
PotOfGoldXxx chapter 20 . 2/19/2012
I really liked your explanation of how everything in Cinderella happened and it amused me greatly. I'm a little sad though that Olivia didn't get her happy (romantic) every after.
your awesome reviewer chapter 20 . 10/30/2009
cinderella is a friggin loony! hahahahaha! she cracks me up. i kind of wanted olivia to end up with the prince. but a psychopath is okay. ahhahaha
That One Dork Stacey chapter 20 . 10/3/2009
Wow. Freaking. Perfect. You have quite some talent for taking a very cliche story and making it a refreshingly new experience.


-Stace :]
RangeRider chapter 20 . 6/21/2007
Stolen Post-It chapter 20 . 6/21/2007
Aww. That was amazing. That really is a perfect ending for Olivia (or is she going by Isabel now?). Crazy cat lady seems exactly how she'd end up, but it's not sad like the moniker would suggest. It was really wonderful.
HopefulAuthor chapter 20 . 6/17/2007

Te-riffic ending!
RangeRider chapter 19 . 6/16/2007
This was great ending, but I need some things cleared up!

Like, why did the prince announce he was marrying Olivia, if it was Cinderella who he really loved?
RangeRider chapter 18 . 6/14/2007
More, please! But why did the prince agree to pretend that Cinderella was Olivia?
HopefulAuthor chapter 17 . 6/12/2007
This is excellent! It reminds me of the theme in 'Wicked', but this is far better! It's fresh without being vulgar, funny without being corny, and amusing without being forced. I absolutely love the dialog, pacing, and little events in here. This should be published. Honestly. I am impressed. My only problems are some mild punctuation mistakes, a few awkwardly short or drag-on paragraphs.
Salt and Vinegar Pringles chapter 17 . 6/12/2007
I like your take on cinderella - it's so different! and much happier. the step-sisters aren't horrible, neither is the step-mother.
RangeRider chapter 16 . 6/9/2007
Oh...don't leave me at a cliffhanger like this! Please update soon!
thegreenincucumbers chapter 15 . 6/6/2007
ah, i loved that. but i keep getting this crawly feeling that somehow he'll end up still wanting to marry her. lol. even though it's cinderella, and we all know what happened with cindy rella. awesome chapter!
RangeRider chapter 15 . 6/6/2007
This is getting incredibly GOOD! I am so anxious to know more!
RangeRider chapter 14 . 6/4/2007
This is going beautifully. With alot of stories, they start out great but then the author doesn't know what to do with the story, so they start getting boring. This is not the case with your story-it's interesting and exciting all the way! Update soon!
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