Reviews for Breath |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was soo cute! It wasnt like any of your other stories. I liked how you sneaked those memories in and it made my heart go all.. Achey.. When the guy turned away after she said "I love you" |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm, i like the overall tone you created with this piece. seems good the way it is, a good conclusion, unless of course there is a plot to create. otherwise, good job keep writing |