Reviews for T e a r s
Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
Sad but beautiful.
Ironic Presence chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
That was beautiful... I could really feel the tears, the heartache, behind the words. :,(
continuous brevity chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
pretty :)

i liked the part when you were talking about a choking sound erupting, it created a nice image.

good work!
Kate Collinson chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
you have some typos like "do you seem them?" but i actually thought that it was pretty good!