|Reviews for T e a r s|
| Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
Sad but beautiful.
| Ironic Presence chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
That was beautiful... I could really feel the tears, the heartache, behind the words. :,(
| continuous brevity chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
i liked the part when you were talking about a choking sound erupting, it created a nice image.
| Kate Collinson chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
you have some typos like "do you seem them?" but i actually thought that it was pretty good!